Friday, April 16, 2010

my heaven was here.. :) :)

(today i had visited ma school aftr so many years it ws a grt feeling to be der,
reminding old memories so i had tried to put it in ma words..
dnt knw whether i had scceeded or nt :) )


I walk thru d gate of my old school
Once again..
.

Walkin thru dat lonely path covered with dry leaves..
where Smiles shared..heart broken
n tear spilled.......

Those boring prayers followed by teacher's speech..
was something , i always tried to skip :P

as i steped into d lonely old classroom
only memories ws der for company me
I saw myself on every benches
laughing & murmring wid ma friends...


The bunked classes wth also d fear of being caught
proxy by frnds was d only way of escape..
the exams tension, as dey came near..
can c ma frnds, buttering teachers with d result's fear..

the canteen meetings whr lots of things i spill..
n payment of bill was d most big deal..
In d playground i saw maself gt hurt..
those skinny toes were easier to fix den broken hearts..

dos sweet crush, d game of eyes..
i miss dos blusing smile wth d feeling of shy.

I found my soul was still somewhere..
in d school..n realised dat..
years ago, "MY HEAVEN WAS HERE"




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19 comments:

bibhash k jha said...

hmm . I think I will have to go to my school to .. the whole thing I read and it was like I was walking in my school .

Nethra said...

I guess I'm the only one who doesn't miss my school days.
By the way, nice post. :)

Ashiq.... said...

more r less the same story:)
yeah even my heavn was there:)
nice post anyway

Romeo said...

Very well written Deepa. Reminds me of my school days. It started with forcefully dragging me out of bed by my mother. Then having quick breakfast and running for school.

Playing with other kids, getting injuries was my daily routine.

I really miss those days so much. Thank you Deepa for this beautiful post, now I think I have to visit my school after reading this. :)

An Ordinary Gal said...

so sweet, it reminded me my school days. I am also planning to go my school...well written Deepa :)

Madhu said...

Nostalgic posts again..:( :( Everyone around me is doing that nowdays..brings back fond and i-want-to-go-back-there kind of memories...Gaa!

Chocolate Lover said...

awwww.... shooo shweet x)

deepa kashyap said...

@nethra
its a bit surprising dat u dnt miss those days..

deepa kashyap said...

@ashiq..
yup i agree its more or lees same story..we all miss school days :(

deepa kashyap said...

@bibhash
romeo
an ordinary gal
thnx :)
i think u sud surly visit ur school to refresh all sweet memories :)

deepa kashyap said...

@madhu
y u sounding a bit sad?? everything is allryte na?? n m sorry dear to make u sad :(

deepa kashyap said...

@chocolate lover
:) :)

♫♪♥W!nK♥♪♫ said...

Hey!! Just came across your blog. Pretty template :)The true meaning of school no doubt comes out only after we leave :)
I still am in school for the next two years though :p
Nice blog!!
Do check out mine :)
Take Care
♪♫

Abhi said...

OMG! this is exactly feeling I've been going through since few days.. my last few posts have been related to school memories, n u really made them fresh.. i could feel entering into my own school as i began reading the post.. it was really so amazing time..

Thanks for rejuvenating those times.. they r always the soul of everyone!

great work..

abc said...

nice post abt school days..even i miss them

deepa kashyap said...

@wink
thnx n enjoy ur school days fr more two years :P
i will check ur blog soon :)
keep visiting..

deepa kashyap said...

@abhi
abc
thnx a lot :)
keep visiting..

Vineet said...

nicely narrated,infact like many, got a bit nostalagic, trust me life was much bettr wen we didnt knew dat apple n blackberry CAN b sumthn other than fruits,,

deepa kashyap said...

thnx vinit

listen to ur heart....