Showing posts with label fiction. Show all posts
Showing posts with label fiction. Show all posts

Sunday, August 22, 2010

love vs friendship

every story has an ending either good or bad.. simple or rocking , happy or sad !!
so i decided to complete my story which i had written long back 

                    




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They were getting apart tomorrow but she was still not able to share an important part of her life, was she afraid of losing him? No its not true they are friends  he will definitely understand her feelings but what if he will misunderstood her , what if he like her and expects same .. many thoughts were coming in her mind, just one night before they were sitting on roof , after some silly, stupid and useless talks he approached her : hey I got something important to tell you, please don’t take me wrong.
ya carry on  (replied in lower voice as she was scared as well amazed  at the same time what if he had feelings for me .. I should have told everything before.. )
he continued : I don’t know what attracts me to you, your simplicity, your smile, your pain or just the feeling of insecurity  as I am getting more n more attracted towards u , because I don’t want to imagine my life without you, I am addicted to you, your silly talks.  I had tried many times to ask what is bothering you, why you are sad but failed to do so hope I am not the reason behind it.
Your presence makes me feel comfortable. We had shared every little bit of life with each other and I really wish if we could life together forever and ever. But I am confused as I think its not love,  ya I loved you a lot in all these years even I am not sure if that was love or just a connection between us , a bond , a relationship which kept me connected with you with the threads of our childhood memories, I waited for this day so long and when today you are here I am not able to define my wait for you . I had always remembered you as my best friend, don’t know why but I never felt anything different for you.

Please help me out I don’t know what’s going on at your end. What you think about me, will wait for you as I did so long..you can answer now or can think about it but please reply me till morning . I will leave in the morning .
(There was a complete silence for few minutes)
Then he left wishing her “good night”.
Good night (she tried to reply with a smile)
She was lying on the bed overwhelmed with his words , he had told everything so simply n honestly, kept on thinking till felled asleep.
( it was morning he was leaving from there )
She was standing in front of her, he was going .. they were getting apart all over again. he came near to her for a goodbye …. She hugged him and burst out in tears   “Why didn’t you told me all these things earlier?  I wasn’t hiding my feelings from you but there was something else which was not so important then us so didn’t shared.  I love you a lot, want you to be in my life always as my best friend as like the same we were before.. . I can’t afford to lose you don’t you dare to go away .  yes it’s not love it’s a relationship more special then love which is called as “friendship” .
He didn’t utter a single word just smiled as he got the meaning of their relationship and they again promised to be best friends forever and ever !!


 
p.s. let me know whether i succeed to give it a nice ending or not :) :)

Wednesday, June 16, 2010

once upon a time !!


He and she was childhood friend and met after almost 10 years in a family function.
They had so many things so share, to ask, to inform, and to complain and lots more but didn’t even know from where to start.

She always found him staring at her throughout the function. She loved each and every prank he done with her, talking, laughing, late night sms exchange while everyone sleep yet he sleep to the next room: P.

For her he was : “ I had a crush and you will have to listen – friend, He was her fix-it- friend, her I’d had such a hard day please listen to it- friend, I’m so hungry come eat with me- friend, two eyes always staring at her: friend, which earrings look best with this dress- friend. . A friend who never told her “ohh you are looking awesome in this dress but always teasing her like “what’s wrong with your hairs”? “Tu itni bhi buri nai dikhti yaar “n it doesn’t matter whatever color you will be dressed in you will look same she always took all this as compliment as there was no other way: D “

Everything was so perfect from their childhood only when they promised to marry each other at the age of just 9-10. But now it was just an unforgettable reason to blush when someone remind her about it in front of him ..

She wished to tell him thanks for being so special for her... for being a great listener, and friend she tried many times to tell him about her love but something was stopping her from doing so. while all growing years he waited for her but didn’t knew how she met with “dream boy” of her life, fallen in love, got cheated so badly and left with the fact of her life “love always hurts”...

p.s thus a story which was started once upon a time with their friendship was getting new wings of dream
With the same care, affection and love.. love?? well this was yet to be discovered :)

... to be contd.

Friday, May 14, 2010

True love never have ending !!!





He saw her on a party.. She was so outstanding, many guys chasing after her, while he was so normal, nobody paid attention to him.
He was staring at her,but didn't got the guts to go and talk ..
He tried once or twice but failed to drag her attention so he was sitting sad till he saw her approaching towards him
Hey hii - she greeted
Hello- he replied.. he was just feeling if his wish was coming true.
after some conversation he invited her to have coffee with him..
she was surprised but due to being polite, she promised " i will.. but just one coffee.. ok?? he agreed
They were on 1st date (n last as she promised for only one coffee)
he was too nervous to say anything,even she was feeling uncomfortable so after a little conversation she asked " hey i am sorry but let me go home now its too late".
suddenly he asked the waiter : "would you please give me some salt? I'd like to put it in my coffee."
what?? she was so much surprised now , everyone stared at him it was so strange..
His face was red, still he put the salt in the coffee and drunk it..
She asked him curiously; do you have hobby about this??
he replied :
no its my necessity now,"when I was a little boy, I was living near the sea, I love playing in the sea, I could feel the taste of the sea, just like the taste of the salty coffee. Now every time I have the salty coffee, I always think of my childhood, think of my hometown, I miss my hometown so much, I miss my parents who are still living there".
a tear rolled down on his cheeks..
she was deeply touched by his true feelings, a guy who was innocent enough to spill out his homesickness,must loves his home, cares about it, his responsblities of home.
So now she started talking about her family, her childhood memories,hometown n blah blah..
they had really a nice talk,as well begining of their story ..they now coninued to date, every time she meets him she found as he was the guy of her dreams who meets her all demands, he was having tolerance, kind hearted, cool, careful and almost everything which makes a guy perfect to be someone dream lover..
she was so thankful to his salty coffee..
Then the story was just like every beautiful love story , the princess
married to the prince, then they were living the happy life...
every time she make coffee, she put some salt in it, as she knew that's the way he like his coffee..

After some years he passed away in an accident..
one day while arranging his self she got his diary..
turned the pages..
after some daily entries she found one page
"hey honey.. i am sorry please forgive me, forgive my whole life lie. This was the only lie I said to you---the salty coffee. Remember the first time we dated? I was so nervous at that time, actually I wanted some sugar, but I said salt. It was hard for me to change so I just went ahead.I never thought that could be the start of our communication! I tried to tell you the truth many timee in my life, but I was too afraid to do that, as I have promised not to lie to you for anything.. i don't know whether i will be ever able to let you know about this but i wish if i could tell you that I don't like the salty coffee, what a strange bad taste..but i can have the same salty coffee for my whole life Having you with me is my biggest happiness for my whole life. If I can live for the second time, still want to know you and have you for my whole life,even though I have to drink the salty coffee again love you lots.."

Her tears made the page totally wet.
Someday, someone asked her: what's
the taste of salty coffee?
" It's sweet... " She replied n continued to drink coffee with salt throughout her life..


p.s i heard this story by one of my friend n loved it a lot so i m narrating it again here.. hope u will like it :)
listen to ur heart....