Friday, May 14, 2010

True love never have ending !!!





He saw her on a party.. She was so outstanding, many guys chasing after her, while he was so normal, nobody paid attention to him.
He was staring at her,but didn't got the guts to go and talk ..
He tried once or twice but failed to drag her attention so he was sitting sad till he saw her approaching towards him
Hey hii - she greeted
Hello- he replied.. he was just feeling if his wish was coming true.
after some conversation he invited her to have coffee with him..
she was surprised but due to being polite, she promised " i will.. but just one coffee.. ok?? he agreed
They were on 1st date (n last as she promised for only one coffee)
he was too nervous to say anything,even she was feeling uncomfortable so after a little conversation she asked " hey i am sorry but let me go home now its too late".
suddenly he asked the waiter : "would you please give me some salt? I'd like to put it in my coffee."
what?? she was so much surprised now , everyone stared at him it was so strange..
His face was red, still he put the salt in the coffee and drunk it..
She asked him curiously; do you have hobby about this??
he replied :
no its my necessity now,"when I was a little boy, I was living near the sea, I love playing in the sea, I could feel the taste of the sea, just like the taste of the salty coffee. Now every time I have the salty coffee, I always think of my childhood, think of my hometown, I miss my hometown so much, I miss my parents who are still living there".
a tear rolled down on his cheeks..
she was deeply touched by his true feelings, a guy who was innocent enough to spill out his homesickness,must loves his home, cares about it, his responsblities of home.
So now she started talking about her family, her childhood memories,hometown n blah blah..
they had really a nice talk,as well begining of their story ..they now coninued to date, every time she meets him she found as he was the guy of her dreams who meets her all demands, he was having tolerance, kind hearted, cool, careful and almost everything which makes a guy perfect to be someone dream lover..
she was so thankful to his salty coffee..
Then the story was just like every beautiful love story , the princess
married to the prince, then they were living the happy life...
every time she make coffee, she put some salt in it, as she knew that's the way he like his coffee..

After some years he passed away in an accident..
one day while arranging his self she got his diary..
turned the pages..
after some daily entries she found one page
"hey honey.. i am sorry please forgive me, forgive my whole life lie. This was the only lie I said to you---the salty coffee. Remember the first time we dated? I was so nervous at that time, actually I wanted some sugar, but I said salt. It was hard for me to change so I just went ahead.I never thought that could be the start of our communication! I tried to tell you the truth many timee in my life, but I was too afraid to do that, as I have promised not to lie to you for anything.. i don't know whether i will be ever able to let you know about this but i wish if i could tell you that I don't like the salty coffee, what a strange bad taste..but i can have the same salty coffee for my whole life Having you with me is my biggest happiness for my whole life. If I can live for the second time, still want to know you and have you for my whole life,even though I have to drink the salty coffee again love you lots.."

Her tears made the page totally wet.
Someday, someone asked her: what's
the taste of salty coffee?
" It's sweet... " She replied n continued to drink coffee with salt throughout her life..


p.s i heard this story by one of my friend n loved it a lot so i m narrating it again here.. hope u will like it :)

17 comments:

aritra the daydreamer said...

u writing just warmed my heart..Nice!!1

by the way i too have a blog its www.aritra704.blogspot.com

it wud be a pleasure if u visit.comments and followers are always welcome

Suree said...

yeah i read this story 3 months back somewhere,awestruck by the love he has shown on her..:)

An Ordinary Gal said...

it was really very nice :)

saurabh..... said...

now u can write a novel good going keep it up ......

deepa kashyap said...

@aritra

thnx a lot
i will surly visit ur blog n comment too :)
ohh ya n will follow too :P

deepa kashyap said...

@suree

yeah i was also so touched by his love..

thnx :)

deepa kashyap said...

@ riya

thax dear.. m glad u liked it :)

deepa kashyap said...

@saurabh

welcome to my blog n comments
thank a lot
ya i will write a novel but who will read :) :P

bibhash k jha said...

that is the best romantic story (of a dumb :P ) i ever heard ..
i read it twice-thrice ..and every time i read i like it :)

deepa kashyap said...

@bibhash finally :P :P

Chandrika Shubham said...

Very touching indeed. I liked the twist in the story. :)

deepa kashyap said...

@chadrika welcome to ma blog
im glad u liked it :) :)

impuregod said...

"fantasy"

deepa kashyap said...

@impuregod
:) :)

Ratz said...

Hello lovely lady.... i know i am just too late here to read and comment on this post... but i might as well do it... So this is Ratz here. I liked this quirky story. I am not much of a love story sucker but this was funny.... Nice to be here at your blog....

deepa kashyap said...

@ratz
thanks a ton
m glad u liked it :)

Tarang Sinha said...

Very nice story. I've read this on some short story site. If you don't mind I would advice you something, enclose the dialogues with inverted comma everytime and give some space between narration and dialogues. It will make your story more interesting. Don,t mind and keep up the good work.

listen to ur heart....