Wednesday, June 16, 2010

once upon a time !!


He and she was childhood friend and met after almost 10 years in a family function.
They had so many things so share, to ask, to inform, and to complain and lots more but didn’t even know from where to start.

She always found him staring at her throughout the function. She loved each and every prank he done with her, talking, laughing, late night sms exchange while everyone sleep yet he sleep to the next room: P.

For her he was : “ I had a crush and you will have to listen – friend, He was her fix-it- friend, her I’d had such a hard day please listen to it- friend, I’m so hungry come eat with me- friend, two eyes always staring at her: friend, which earrings look best with this dress- friend. . A friend who never told her “ohh you are looking awesome in this dress but always teasing her like “what’s wrong with your hairs”? “Tu itni bhi buri nai dikhti yaar “n it doesn’t matter whatever color you will be dressed in you will look same she always took all this as compliment as there was no other way: D “

Everything was so perfect from their childhood only when they promised to marry each other at the age of just 9-10. But now it was just an unforgettable reason to blush when someone remind her about it in front of him ..

She wished to tell him thanks for being so special for her... for being a great listener, and friend she tried many times to tell him about her love but something was stopping her from doing so. while all growing years he waited for her but didn’t knew how she met with “dream boy” of her life, fallen in love, got cheated so badly and left with the fact of her life “love always hurts”...

p.s thus a story which was started once upon a time with their friendship was getting new wings of dream
With the same care, affection and love.. love?? well this was yet to be discovered :)

... to be contd.

14 comments:

bibhash k jha said...

I hope u don't do the same thing to someone what was done to you in discovering your new relations . I hope you understand what I mean.

DiDo said...

very cute :) ... as always i love reading ur blog

An Ordinary Gal said...

ohh so very nicely written...m waiting eagerly for next part :)

nitwit said...

nice post...

Madhu said...

am in aww land..:)

Sourav C. Pandey said...

Some stories are etched .. arnd your story reminded me one .. nice! :)

deepa kashyap said...

@bibhash i told you its FICTION :)

deepa kashyap said...

@DIDO thanks :)

deepa kashyap said...

@an ordinary gal
will come up with next part soon
thanks :)

deepa kashyap said...

@nitwit
thanks :)

deepa kashyap said...

@madhu
be there for some more time :P

deepa kashyap said...

@sourav
thanks :)

puzzlingprajyoti said...

I'm remembering what they say " Can a guy and a girl just remain friends?".

deepa kashyap said...

lets see will they remain just friends or ?????
thanks for comments !!
keep visiting :)

listen to ur heart....