Let the words remain unsaid…..
Let the feelings remain unshared…..
Let the dreams remain unseen…..
Let the prayers remain unfulfilled…..
Let the tears remain unnoticed……
Let me remain imperfect…..
No I don’t have anything to share, to ask or to complain about…
All I need now is YOU from the crowd around me…
Don’t pretend to know me..
Just sit beside me.. and make me feel
You are there …forever.. and ever for me…….
p.s happiieeeee diwali :) :)
p.s happiieeeee diwali :) :)
22 comments:
awwwwwwww thats sweet ^^
if words are unsaid , they accumulate into misunderstanding
when feelings remain unshared , they become wound ..freak you out
if u dont dream ..u cant achieve
tears remain unnoticed??? why the heck i m so alone that no one notices my tears
and yes imperfect ??? thats so relative ...
wow..deepa u do all this too???
cool that!!!
expressing is imp no?
Hey happy diwali to you tooo..
All the best and yeah i am sure someone somwehre will be there for you forever :)
Bikram's
Change the "pray" to "prayer" otherwise it's a beautiful and meaningful poem.
you have been tagged :3
oh how life ,could open up to give fresh start ,to love ,share our lives as we both know and believed it should been ,I been trying get back to you ,
the days turned to months
now my heart weeps ,as I can't feel you ,near as always held .
I am scared
I never wanted ,you out my life ,Listen to many things ,you speak of me .
maybe I've loss
A Truth that beats with my own Heart ,will be
You
Two Fools that kept pushing each other away
Two fools ,that wouldn't pick up a phone ,or talk
two fools ,with a smile
Let go
rest our lives
those two fools
will always feel those beats of
"our hearts "
wiping away my Tears ,Screaming with my complete Soul to be Heard
I Love You
My Dreams ,you will always be ,maybe in life ,couldn't be together ,as I would gave
was no one that was there to Listen
Was always there ,to fix me
Was none that accepted ,after hearing truth
there was many that was there to Judge
As ,it must of seemed ,my heart ,felt nothing
as must seemed things I done ,was heartless
dreams ,you shall be ,with me that ,holds no judging ,only accepting ,with love ,we always knew
Pray ,
You hear my Heart
Nice lines, barring that mistake as to "prayer"..
Loved it.
@choco thanks sweety :))
@some idiot it doesn't work with everyone, just few most special person are there in your life with whom ur feelings get more importance then the words !!
thanks for dropping by :)
@madhu ya *sigh* :))
ya expressing is important but understanding is also imp.. hai na :D
@bikram thanks :) hope so :p
@nethra Done :) thanks !!
@choco okey will do it soon :)
@shadow nice poem !!
thanks for dropping by :)
@sayan thanks for dropping by :)
done the corrections !!
@shadow .. u keep posting that same nice poem of yours in everyone's blog as comment . what does that mean .
Well deepa .. you contradict yourself in the poem . First you say and then in the end you want him to make you feel . Does that mean that only you want him to let you feel and you will not share your feeling ? Thats so sick and corny. Moreover , you ask for for prayers to be unfulfilled yet you seem to be be praying all through your poem .
shadow is a spammer . I saw shadow posting that same poem as comment in at least 6 different blogs including mine. I don't think why would it put such a nice poem in a comment instead of publishing in its blog .
If you don't believe .. search Google for this poem . You will find this poem posted as comment in dozens of blogs .
I mean first you say that let the feeling remain unshared and then in the end you want him to make you feel
@some idiot
yeah sharing is not always important sometimes understanding between two person do the job, and feelings become more important then the said words !!
btw the main thing which i wanna say from this poem is " all i need is.. you" nothing else.. hope now you got it !!
@Anonymous thanks for the information !!
how u share your feelings without making it feel ...
i am not asking to share without feeling. but to feel without sharing !!
so u mean u r not making him feel . Just want be felt ?
so u only approve comments which u like . Nice. But that way you are not going to improve .
amazing write up
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