Sunday, October 31, 2010

All i need is.. You !!





Let the words remain unsaid…..
Let the feelings remain unshared…..
Let the dreams remain unseen…..
Let the prayers remain unfulfilled…..
Let the tears remain unnoticed……
Let me remain imperfect…..

No I don’t have anything to share, to ask or to complain about…
All I need now is YOU from the crowd around me…

 Don’t pretend to know me..
When I even don’t know.. where I am…
 
Just sit beside me.. and make me feel
You are there …forever.. and ever for me…….


 

p.s happiieeeee diwali :) :) 

22 comments:

♥ Chocolate lover ♥ said...

awwwwwwww thats sweet ^^

some_idiot said...

if words are unsaid , they accumulate into misunderstanding

when feelings remain unshared , they become wound ..freak you out

if u dont dream ..u cant achieve

tears remain unnoticed??? why the heck i m so alone that no one notices my tears

and yes imperfect ??? thats so relative ...

Madhu said...

wow..deepa u do all this too???

cool that!!!

expressing is imp no?

Bikramjit said...

Hey happy diwali to you tooo..

All the best and yeah i am sure someone somwehre will be there for you forever :)

Bikram's

Nethra said...

Change the "pray" to "prayer" otherwise it's a beautiful and meaningful poem.

♥ Chocolate lover ♥ said...

you have been tagged :3

shadow said...

oh how life ,could open up to give fresh start ,to love ,share our lives as we both know and believed it should been ,I been trying get back to you ,

the days turned to months
now my heart weeps ,as I can't feel you ,near as always held .

I am scared

I never wanted ,you out my life ,Listen to many things ,you speak of me .

maybe I've loss

A Truth that beats with my own Heart ,will be

You
Two Fools that kept pushing each other away
Two fools ,that wouldn't pick up a phone ,or talk

two fools ,with a smile
Let go

rest our lives
those two fools
will always feel those beats of
"our hearts "

wiping away my Tears ,Screaming with my complete Soul to be Heard
I Love You

My Dreams ,you will always be ,maybe in life ,couldn't be together ,as I would gave

was no one that was there to Listen

Was always there ,to fix me

Was none that accepted ,after hearing truth

there was many that was there to Judge

As ,it must of seemed ,my heart ,felt nothing

as must seemed things I done ,was heartless

dreams ,you shall be ,with me that ,holds no judging ,only accepting ,with love ,we always knew

Pray ,
You hear my Heart

Sayandeep Kundu said...

Nice lines, barring that mistake as to "prayer"..
Loved it.

deepa kashyap said...

@choco thanks sweety :))

@some idiot it doesn't work with everyone, just few most special person are there in your life with whom ur feelings get more importance then the words !!
thanks for dropping by :)

deepa kashyap said...

@madhu ya *sigh* :))
ya expressing is important but understanding is also imp.. hai na :D

@bikram thanks :) hope so :p

deepa kashyap said...

@nethra Done :) thanks !!

@choco okey will do it soon :)

@shadow nice poem !!
thanks for dropping by :)

@sayan thanks for dropping by :)
done the corrections !!

Light said...

@shadow .. u keep posting that same nice poem of yours in everyone's blog as comment . what does that mean .

some_idiot said...

Well deepa .. you contradict yourself in the poem . First you say and then in the end you want him to make you feel . Does that mean that only you want him to let you feel and you will not share your feeling ? Thats so sick and corny. Moreover , you ask for for prayers to be unfulfilled yet you seem to be be praying all through your poem .

Anonymous said...

shadow is a spammer . I saw shadow posting that same poem as comment in at least 6 different blogs including mine. I don't think why would it put such a nice poem in a comment instead of publishing in its blog .

If you don't believe .. search Google for this poem . You will find this poem posted as comment in dozens of blogs .

some_idiot said...

I mean first you say that let the feeling remain unshared and then in the end you want him to make you feel

deepa kashyap said...

@some idiot
yeah sharing is not always important sometimes understanding between two person do the job, and feelings become more important then the said words !!
btw the main thing which i wanna say from this poem is " all i need is.. you" nothing else.. hope now you got it !!

deepa kashyap said...

@Anonymous thanks for the information !!

some_idiot said...

how u share your feelings without making it feel ...

deepa kashyap said...

i am not asking to share without feeling. but to feel without sharing !!

some_idiot said...

so u mean u r not making him feel . Just want be felt ?

some_idiot said...

so u only approve comments which u like . Nice. But that way you are not going to improve .

Praveen-Techperk said...

amazing write up

listen to ur heart....